Thursday, February 16, 2012

voice


the light is falling
thin and cold
so like the emptiness
of metal



until the words
"are you coming?"
soft and orange and convincing
as any i've ever heard


4 comments:

Elisabeth said...

The gold orange of the ducks and the ice blue of the water provide a powerful backdrop to these words, Steven. I recognise their convincing aspect, persuasive forceful or just plain inviting, 'are you coming' along too.

JJ Roa Rodriguez said...

Nice pics and nice write...

JJrod'z

erin said...

yes, i was laughing at the orange ducks and how they made me feel, called upon.)

xo
erin

Kay said...

hi steven, beautiful words i esp. like 'the emptiness of metal'....x